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At sunrise, a mature male Indian peacock with an iridescent blue-green neck and breast, a small blue crest, deep brown eyes, a long train of emerald, turquoise, and bronze feathers patterned with golden eye-spots, and strong gray legs practiced his call from the garden wall. It came out rough and sudden, like a rusty gate.

The Peacock Who Traded His Song for Feathers
fables folktales · Ages 9-12

The Peacock Who Traded His Song for Feathers

A peacock envies another bird's voice until he understands that beauty, usefulness, and longing do not always fit the same body.

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1. At sunrise, a mature male Indian peacock with an iridescent blue-green neck and breast, a small blue crest, deep brown eyes, a long train of emerald, turquoise, and bronze feathers patterned with golden eye-spots, and strong gray legs practiced his call from the garden wall. It came out rough and sudden, like a rusty gate.

2. Then a small nightingale sang from the jasmine vine. His notes rose clear and silver, turning through the leaves as if the morning had found a voice.

3. The peacock lowered his train. He studied the nightingale's plain brown feathers and wondered what it would be like to be wanted for a song instead of stared at for a shine.

4. “I would trade one feather for your voice,” the peacock said. “One feather cannot buy a voice,” said the nightingale. “But perhaps a wish can be tested.”

5. The nightingale taught him to breathe slowly and shape each note before letting it go. The peacock tried. His first sound startled a frog from the pond.

6. He tried again, and again. He learned where the sound broke, where it wobbled, and where silence helped it begin. Still, his call remained his own.

7. At evening, the peacock heard the nightingale sing to the fading light. His own throat felt heavy. Perhaps the bargain had been foolish from the start.

8. A light rain began. The peacock opened his train, and its broad feathers sheltered the nightingale beneath the dripping branches. The nightingale's song kept the waiting gentle.

9. When the rain passed, the peacock listened differently. The nightingale could lift a quiet morning, but the peacock could make a roof of color when the sky fell down.

10. The peacock did not stop wishing for the nightingale's voice. He simply stopped asking his feathers to become it. Beauty, usefulness, and longing did not always fit the same body.

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